Monday, September 27, 2010

9-11 Essay












Kamau Stokes
                                                                                                                   Kamau Stokes      9                                                                                    9/11/10
                                                                                                                
                                                                                                New York Falls
On the morning of September 11, 2001, terrorist attempted to kill and destroy
people and buildings in New York City and Washington D.C with three air
planes by crashing on purpose.

          Coming to you live from ABC2 News, hello everybody and good
morning, well I shouldn’t say good morning because what I am seeing with
my own eyes ladies and gentlemen looks like a plane just hit the World Trade
Center in New York City. A large aircraft just hit the one of the twin towers.
Oh my lord, ladies and gentlemen, this is not a very good site. It looks like the
plane is in the Twin Tower and there are fires and explosions occurring. As
the helicopter shows, you can see two holes in the wall of the Twin Tower.
Some families are losing loved ones rite now people. This is just outrageous. I
am speechless rite now, I just don’t know what to say. We just heard that a
women saw a jet fly into the building. We are not sure whether this was an
accident or an attack. We are in the roam of speculation on happened to the
world trade center. (The time is 9:02 and the plane hit about 20 minutes ago).
Oh my lord ladies and gentlemen, another plane has just hit the other side of
the World Trade Center. Now it is believed that the city of New York is under
attack. This is a horror, many people work in this wonderful building and
some may have died from this attack on 9-11-2009. This will probably be
listed as one of the most vicious attack of America. I just can’t believe what I
am seeing here today.
We are receiving phone calls from some people that are actually on two
other planes. They say that one plane plans to hit the Pentagon and the other
plans to hit Washington D.C.  If I was on that plane, to be honest, I would be
terrified. WOW, the other plane has just hit the pentagon; the plane literally
just went right through the pentagon. There is a lot of fire on the top levels of
the World Trade Center. I don’t know how long this will go on folks, but these
terrorist are causing a lot of damage in the New York City and the World
Trade Center.
(Live from ABC2 News in New york City I am Kamau Stokes here with my
co-worker Kelly Edmonds, we are taking a sort break and we’ll be right
back.)
 We are back with one of the worst terrorist attacks in America. As you
can see Kelly, these people are really trying to destroy these wonderful
buildings in New York. I am not sure why they choose to hit new York first.
As for the other plane, if that plane reaches and hits our capital our country
will face a major challenge. Some of those challenges are; repairs, deciding to
go to war, and rebuilding our nation’s capital. 
(WARNING: STAY INSIDE)
          Kelly, one of the towers is falling down. The building just collapsed in a
blink of an eye. This is a terrible mess; there are explosions, glass breaking,
and screaming all around the city of New York.  WOW, the second building
has just fell down and there is just terrifying screaming sounds coming from
every direction. The city is in panic right now because this terrifying attack in
New York City.  I have just received information that is very heroic and sad.
The aircraft that was planning to hit our capital was taken over by passenger
who decided to make a plan to get the terrorist out of the cockpit and control
the plan. But their attempt was not successful and the plane crashed in a field,
killing all of the brave passengers on board. (TRAGIC).  Ladies and
gentlemen, this has been a tragic event, many police and firefighters are
searching for any survivors that were in the plane crash or people who may be
trapped under the World Trade Center.
Live from ABC2 News, I’m Kamau and I’m Kelly, here with a terrible site of
the 9-11 attack in New York City.
          During the 9-11-2001 attack, 3000 people were killed and many were
wounded. Saturday was the anniversary of 9-11 and many families gathered
together to honor their loved ones who died during 9-11-2001. They may be
gone, but they are definitely not forgotten.  This historic event changed many
people’s lives, some have lost family members and some just struggle to find a
new place to work since the World Trade Center fell and many people worked
there.

1 comment:

  1. Kamau, you took a very interesting approach to this story. Your eyewitness account was good, and it provided a good summary of the day's events.

    However, you did leave out the other two elements of this assignment: the interview of an adult, and the analysis of the economic impact. So I can't give you the good grade you would like, since so much of the essay is missing.

    65/100

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